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CKAcres
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 6:31:11 AM
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You got what you came after..
What you see is what you get.
Please stop with the laughter.
Have your expectations been met?


"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 12:41:44 PM
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Have your expectations been met?
Were all of your goals reached?
Or did you really forget..
The cost of your integrity breached..

Rebellious_Soul
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 12:49:31 PM
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The cost of your integrity breached.
but you don't care do you?
Flaunting around in flimsy outfits on the beach.
that is something I would never do.

Because I can,
because I want to,
And because who are you to tell me otherwise?
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 12:57:32 PM
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That is something I would never do..
Force my opinions onto you..
But do I hide them from your view?
Then how would our relationship ever be true?

Rebellious_Soul
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 1:02:42 PM
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Then how can our relationship ever be true?
if you sneak out the way you do.
When late at night, he think I'm asleep.
I see the secrets that you keep.
out in the night you run to her house.
leaving this sad heartbroken mouse.

Because I can,
because I want to,
And because who are you to tell me otherwise?
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 1:35:04 PM
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Leaving this sad heartbroken mouse..
Maybe the heart was falsely given..
It's time to shake that type of louse..
And begin a life worth livin'..

Circle_Something
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 4:21:16 PM
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...And begin a life worth livin'
that's what she said to him,
said he was wasting his life,
she told him to smarten up or leave,
the boy left, came back years later.
He began a silly boy, ended a man,
she married that man,
that man is me.
I love her and she loves me.

Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Don't forget Kitty and Kitten. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
A love poem <3 Kitty & Kitten
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^= <3 ^.^

Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 5:36:27 PM
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I love her and she loves me..
The greatest words ever spoken..
Hearts entwined endlessly..
With a bond that will never be broken..

DirtyMartini
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 6:43:26 PM
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With a bond that will never be broken,
Damn, this Elmers Glue is really good,
Can't seem to separate these two boards,
Just hope I never again need this wood.


I once knew a drinker who had a moderating problem...

Colors_of_the_Wind
Posted: Monday, June 3, 2013 10:01:11 PM
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Just hope I never again need this wood...
For getting it from his house I never could,
Even if I tried,
He is the reason that I cried,
I'd never go back even if someone said I should.

Working on the lore, language and characters of a supernatural novel when I'm not trying to survive 2020. If ya wanna help with that survival check out my shop!

The Wandering Squirrel
CKAcres
Posted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013 5:16:06 AM
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I'd never go back even if someone said I should.
Go back, that is not the way for me to go.
The reason is clear, never do I think I could.
Backwards is not the direction for me I know.
Forward I go, maybe this time I will be understood.


"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013 8:59:34 AM
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Forward I go, maybe this time I will be understood..
Maybe I will finally do what I should..
If only I could..
or would..

Rebellious_Soul
Posted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013 9:59:10 AM
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… Or would
mayde could?
Please do!
I need you.
over here.
Or even there!
With everything we share.
Just show me you care.

Because I can,
because I want to,
And because who are you to tell me otherwise?
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013 3:26:15 PM
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Just show me you care..
Do you dare?
Or will you be unfair..
Lure me to your lair..
And then not share..

CKAcres
Posted: Thursday, June 6, 2013 5:17:27 AM
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And then not share..
Even one kiss or hug..
Why are you so smug..
Take a seat in that chair..

The one right over there..
Cozy, it will hold you snug..
Atop that pretty scatter rug..
Talk with me if you dare..


"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Circle_Something
Posted: Saturday, June 8, 2013 3:29:51 PM
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Talk with me if you dare,
I promise, you won't feel square,
So don't despair,
Get your arse from over there,
Plonk it exactly over here,
Talk with me, my dear,
Honest, you really have nothing to fear!

Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Don't forget Kitty and Kitten. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
A love poem <3 Kitty & Kitten
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^= <3 ^.^

Rebellious_Soul
Posted: Saturday, June 8, 2013 3:35:28 PM
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Honest, you have nothing to fear.
It's just a game, my dear.
with an apple on your head.
we'll throw knives made of lead.
Just to knock it off, I swear.
We wouldn't try to hurt you, not even dare.
Sit there and stay still.
We made sure we were in the will

Because I can,
because I want to,
And because who are you to tell me otherwise?
CKAcres
Posted: Sunday, June 9, 2013 7:44:16 AM
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We made sure we were in the will.
You had been through the mill.
No need to go down to Goodwill?
I will bring the steaks for the grill.


"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Circle_Something
Posted: Monday, June 10, 2013 8:14:57 AM
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I will bring the steaks for the grill,
You can bring the booze,
We'll have a gay old time,
Even if this poem doesn't rhyme.

Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Don't forget Kitty and Kitten. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
A love poem <3 Kitty & Kitten
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^= <3 ^.^

Guest
Posted: Monday, June 10, 2013 8:25:22 AM
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Even if this poem doesn't rhyme
Don't mean it isn't fun
So wipe that frown off your face
Get out there and dance!
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 10, 2013 9:12:41 AM
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Get out there and dance..
It just may be our last chance..
For it seems I've run out of luck..
And I don't really give a .. Hmmmm.. yes I do...

Guest
Posted: Monday, June 10, 2013 10:13:19 AM
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I don't really give a..Hmmmm..yes I do
I really do care about you
With your snarky smile and condescending views
But you make me so made, make me turn blue
Dreamcatcher
Posted: Monday, June 10, 2013 3:23:28 PM
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But you make me so mad, make me turn blue..
It's OK my dear, I know you didn't mean to..
Misunderstandings allowed to accrue..
Lead to distance between me and you..

CKAcres
Posted: Tuesday, June 11, 2013 4:15:47 AM
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Lead to distance between me and you..
Choices made not much one can do.
For every door it is said... you know..
I do not have to finish the quote no...


"No one knows when the final grain of sand will plummet through their own personal Hourglass." ~ CKAcres
"If you really want to make a difference, don't over think it, just do it..."
"Scars of life are deeply etched within the minds of curious old souls."
Poppet
Posted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 5:21:38 PM
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I do not have to finish the quote no...
But because I am who I am, I shall.
You see, I like to finish what I start,
It’s a little quirk of mine.
We all have them, this one is mine.
I won’t share, you won’t do mine.


Circle_Something
Posted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 5:24:56 PM
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I won't share, you won't do mine,
No, don't sit and whine,
Just let me varnish this pine,
And everything will be just fine.

Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Don't forget Kitty and Kitten. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
A love poem <3 Kitty & Kitten
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^= <3 ^.^

burnt7
Posted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013 6:00:50 PM
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And everything will be just fine...
if only i had more wine...
Just a bit will do.
I said Red for heaven's sake!
Yes... a clean glass and the bottle will do...
If only i hadn't ordered wife number 9,
she too, gave birth to some Swine.

When You Don't Feel Like Smiling, Smile Anyway
burnt7
Posted: Thursday, June 13, 2013 3:57:40 AM
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coffee


When You Don't Feel Like Smiling, Smile Anyway
Rebellious_Soul
Posted: Thursday, June 13, 2013 7:29:41 AM
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She too, gave birth to some swine.
What a bizarre phenomenon.
so dearling fetch the wine!
we somehow wound up in Wonderland!

Because I can,
because I want to,
And because who are you to tell me otherwise?
Circle_Something
Posted: Thursday, June 13, 2013 12:38:16 PM
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We somehow wound up in wonderland
Now we're blundering and wondering,
wandering and confused,
How in blazes did we come to be here?

Ghosts, flamingos, guitars and vodka. Don't forget Kitty and Kitten. Eclectic subjects, eccentric stories:

Humorous guide & Recommended Read =^.^= How To Make a Cup of Tea
A flash fiction series :) A Random Moment in Time
A love poem <3 Kitty & Kitten
Editors' Pick! :D I Am The Deep, Dark Woods
And another EP!: The Fragility of Age
=^.^= <3 ^.^

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